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Dear Beautiful Boy,

Tell me this, please:
What possesses you to stay here?

For what reason do you choose me
To hold so close and so tight?

What could you see in this plain little soul
Trapped in a plain little body?


Sometimes I believe I am nothing
But you make it hard to think that

For you, darling Beautiful Boy,
Look at me as if I am something

More than something
As if I am wonderful


A girl who has never thought highly of herself
Does not know what to do

With a Beautiful Boy
Who may love her

Dear Beautiful Boy,

I will ask you quietly, under my breath,
To never go away again
Some painful honesty buried in hidden truths
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PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Student Writer
Fits me so perfectly right now :)
Love it! :+favlove:
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IChooseToLookUp Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Student Writer
Glad to hear it! <3 Thank you!
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MelancholiesChild Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
The text is really beautiful... what impresses me the most is, that this poem is both: platonic and profound. Keep on with that :w00t:
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IChooseToLookUp Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :hug:
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wildmagic13 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
"What could you see in this plain little soul/Trapped in a plain little body?" :+favlove: My beautiful boy... he really made me wonder things like this. Beautiful (:
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IChooseToLookUp Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much! I love knowing others feel the same way. <3
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